Children can get education from various source. They can get education not only from teacher that teachs them at school but also from television program that they watch at home. Watching television doesn’t always have negative impact to children moreover it can develop their imagination and improve their language skill. Usually, in the evening children have to do their homework and use their free time to wacth television. As parents, we know that both watching television and doing homework play important role to improve children’s knowledge but the challenge is “should children be allowed to watch TV before or after doing their homework in the evening?”. For me, even though television offers many benefit, it is better for children to do their homework first. There are three reason why children should be allowed to watch television after doing their homework. First, when a child enjoys their favorite show, they will forget about their homework. Children tend to focus on what they think interesting so when we command them to do their homework, they become less focus on it. That leads me to the second reason why they must do their homework first. The children will not have effective time to study. Enjoing the television program like cartoon for too long will make sleepy quickly. As a result, they will cry or do not want to study or do their task. Finnaly, children must do their homework before watching television because the perfect time to concentrate is in evening. After lunch and take a rest, their energi and focus are increase. It makes them ready to study and makes them feel rileks while studying. After studying, we can give them time to enjoy their favorite television show as a reward and change to increase their knowledge from television. So to sum up, both watching television and studying are important for children but for me studying is a priority that must be done first.
Should children be allowed to watch TV before or after doing their homework in the evening.?
Topic Sentence : There are three reason children should be allowed to watch TV after doing their homework.
A. Main Poin : when a child ejoys their favorite show, they will forget about their homework.
Supporting Detail : Children tend to focus on what they think interesting so when we command them to do their homework, they become less focus on it.
B. Main Poin : The children will not have effective time to study
Supporting Detail : Enjoing the television program like cartoon for too long will make sleepy quickly. As a result, they will cry or do not want to study or do their task.
C. Main Poin : Children must do their homework before watching television because the perfect time to concentrate is in evening
Supporting Detail : After lunch and take a rest, their energi and focus are increase. It makes them ready to study and makes them feel rileks while studying
Concluding Sentence : both watching television and studying are important for children but for me studying is a priority that must be done first.
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